Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Last Resort (Fixed)]

i kno who did what...

and pretty much it sounds like lil saynt str8 tookover this beat....but nice collab regardless....

Bleek989 responds:

yea man, i had just a loop of that synth then saynt flipped ova it and hit me bak wit it within like 30 min... so MAJOR thx to saynt deff held shit down on this one! thx for the review man, keep them lyrics comin man! i got sum lyrics comin so ill holla at u when im done wit em! ha

[[I'm Gone] [[NG Edition]]]

ay

regardless what chu say...u have talent...u say music is somethin thas worth or that u don't have talent...if u don't have talent what is this jo....but i'mma respect u like i alwayz have keep doin u the only thing u have to learn is sharps and flats and what they are use for once u kno that...u will be a great producer...I've tried to quit many time but it ain't that easy...everyday i'm on the cpu makin a beat..i stay up countless nights just to learn somethin new maybe one day i'll show the world what my talent truly has been and what it's tru form is..but enough of that....the piano work is simple but it fits...i love the shakers....the clap...goes with it....the snare...puts me into it more...then when the bassline comes in it has a sad feelin to it...like in a way u don't wanna leave music...but yea..as the techno soundin insturment comes in...as the beat drops...then the chorus comes in that insturment can be improved i can hear a better melody don't make music....let music...enter ya tru pontenial...cuz i hear it in this beat....also...as the second bassline comes in...there are some off notes...but nice nonetheless...but chea...there's my first constructive reveiw..in a way since i'm drunk right now lol...but it ain't the liquor talkin it's me jo..u have talent u just don't see it...like i didn't awhile back....be ezy my nigga stay up and keep doin ya thang whateva it is jo...i got chu....

Ya Boi Reven

DJ-DairyKing responds:

Ay man. I hear you tho. It's da only beat I really did good on. I have stuff in my head, but its impossible for me to get it out. tha drums: FURY's he kilt that. I forgot to give him credit in the description those were his. I did the melodies. my best yet, but it was because i was inspired. my final track, ya know? something... somone would remember.

thanks anyway man. you have talent, we all know. you helped me a lot with music even if u never showed me anything just listening to your music was a learning experience bro. i thank you for what you done for me and continue to you make music for your self. i'll be around listening :).

dj dk aka j trill

[Oh So Smooth (Preview)]

with more work

this can be a professional soundin beat
it needs alot more work..but i like it ....

good job

[~Stomp All Haters~]

DO YA MUTHAFUCKIN THANG

I TOLD U BRUH U HAD TALENT BRO KEEP DOIN U U GOT A TEN AND A FIVE U"LL GET THEM SAMPLES FROM ME ASAP U JUST IMPRESSED ME

Lil-Saynt responds:

lol yes lu i stepped up on dis one!

~1~

[Speaking It True]

ayyy u bastard

u stole my melody lol naw i gave this one to u...good to see u added some nice drums and u already kno how to use delay good job bruh holla @ me when u get off work nigga

~1~

FlaBoi-Mondo-4077 responds:

ya my dude my bad yo ima hit u up later son ima stop by later my sis gone now i can get back 2 my shit

[Blade Territory (rought draft)]

thas sick

i like it so far i don't see nothin wrong but the stringz cuz they off.....but the main melody and the drums are on point i hear u gettin better bro keep doin u i'll drop anotha track soon....i've been sick for the past couple of dayz...but if u finish this u kno i'll put some flow to this without a problem

MattBlade responds:

Aww hell yea, since u be helpin me big brother ill talk to u on aim bro

[Can You Hear Me Now?]

dawg...

idk why it only has 25 dls they are lame as hell bro keep doin ya thang mang i'll rate this up for u

DjTeChniQue responds:

thxs rev .. even if they hate ima still keep the speakers pumpin!!

[Hataz dis 4 u]

it's o.k

u need work homie first take off the delay on the vocals....then u get off beat at times i do too but when u record if it don't sound right do it over and over again until u get it right

use ghost backround voices and adlibs to bring yur style out then u sound dead as hell rap with feelin in yur voice

Broken-Needle responds:

I didn't have the final beat so I couldn't have stayed on it if I didn't kno wut it was, Only the lyrics and vocals r mine da hot beat and da nice positioning of da sounds is done by greeksta. I dno wut my style is yet cuz I jus started rapin, wut I have in mind 4 my next I tink everybody dat duznt like da generic rapers on Tv r gna like, anyways thanks 4 da time u took 2 write dis rev n thanks 4 da review and da good scores,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[~Struggles To Overcome~]

sick shit bro

this don't sound like 45 mins but hey u keep doing ya thang bro just keep doing u....like u've been..don't let anyone bring u down

~1~

Lil-Saynt responds:

im forreal man i did it in 45 mins. i was like dang dat was fast!! lol... i wont let no one bring me dwn!!! haters is my motivaters!!!

~1~