Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[linez anwser]

what is ses thinkin

that this shit is hot mang i like it and i speak it like it is mang keep doing you the only thing i can say is got a little off beat at the towards the end of your verse

linez responds:

good looking my dude .stay up and holla at ya boi

[The Letter]

Welcome Back

what a improvment my nig I love the melodies the crashes bring it out ...and that choir is sicker than an AIDS patient

DjTeChniQue responds:

thxs homie .. good to see u still on ng .. ... i came to a realization that newgrounds is the place i can just make wateva the fk i want .. helping me get back to my old self .. with some new tricks .. i just made this track didnt do much to fine tune it ..

[Welcome 2 Tha Midwest]

tha truth mang

i listen to twista crucial confict ric jilla and many more artists from the midwest and this do sound like something they would rip the hell of out props my nig

NSE989 responds:

lol thats y its called "welcome 2 tha midwest" bro.....

[Zongoralecke]

not bad

but the repetitive piano and the reverb is ridiculous like this sounds more like a linkin park of punk rock than hip hop but nice beat nonetheless just keep workin at it

Eroach responds:

thanks the comment:)

[just wanna dance]

Hmmm

lyrics were on point to the beat and it went together but i would wanna work on your quality and also i understand that all of us ain't born rich lol but learning how to vocal produce will help ya out but i like what i'm hearing you got me bobbing my head so keep it up mang..

trust me i work with a 15$ peice of shit computer mic...
i suggest startin to learn as soon as possible...it's not hard bruh trust me it only took a few weeks to fully understand what each effect does....but no complaints

be ezy mang

~1~

passionboom responds:

i definitly feel wat u sayin good looks to on the how to...i work wit a laptop and thats all...but i werk wit wata i got..u kno

[My Retaliation II]

let me speak

on something why these n***as say me and u got a similar style i hear a few thingz...because we learn off each other we have the same styles Ses just sayin shit ask him to beat battle you my nig then let it be told you doin shit with a pentium 3 computer and blowin most of these lame away fuck em bruh your style is a more diverse style than mine u don't hear Bigg T tellin everyone our styles our similar we just work towards our goal if u had a better cpu which u will cuz once i get my new cpu i'm gonna go up there and give u mine my nig.......

Ses....back off my n***a saynt no one can touch him with a muthafucking semi truck.....

EVERYONE REPSECT LIL SAYNT THE OTHER HALF OF THE PERFECTIONISTS

New Definition Entertainment ~President~ Young Reven

Lil-Saynt responds:

Yea Lu NG dont like me at all lol. when i first posted this it was a 5. under 5 minutes...it went to a 2.7. O_o. but lu u kno what im capable bruh. Im just holdin back cuz of my pentium 3. but you already kno bruh!

~1~

NDE

[Nobody Respects You(diss)]

wtf

so are u guyz gonna keep attackin eas other cuz this is very boring BN u can't rap bruh honestly and truly u have no flow at all bruh i'm not sayin i'm the best in the world i give u that u kno what good music is i gave u that much but rappin no no no sirrrrrr
i only listened to lejin chorus and that's it i don't care bruh stop my ears wanna cry they're bleedin to death don't quit ya day job i wuz spittin better than u at 13 i actually wuz on beat i don't care if u were high or drunk or on crack or LSD i don't care u can't rap bruh u just can't ti's not in u there's no way in hell u could get any better some ppl can rap some ppl can't and to speak the truth u can't even if u keep trying Nobody respects u dawg i ain't supportin nobody but n***as on NG don't kno what hip hop is how in the hell do u get rated up and i get rated down i ain't mad i don't care but the truth is i'm better than u and i get rated down bullshit ass n***as don't like real hip hop and yur not that i don't care how long you've been listening to hip hop hip hop is not u in anyway ....so i will prove my point that this beef is pointless and it's really pointless when your not even on beat yur delivery is not on point u have no punchlines where are yur metaphors...wait i forgot ....that u forgot that u smoke to much and u don't kno what they are cuz weed isn't an excuse for nothing and it will never be .....

Don't quit ya day job i have no reason to diss u yur no where near my level...

Broken-Needle responds:

Well Reven seems to me like ur wanting attention right now, u jus said u didn't even listen to ma' part so how u write such a long review based on assumption? And why are you coming to me when u being hated on? as u can see this track don't got the best score either, if NG is so bad then why da fuck are u still here? I put shit up here for the reviews, I couldn't care less about mines or anyone elses score. And what's wit this blind rage? U say u ain't got beef wit me then why u goin around sayin I beg u to not diss me? seems like u tryin 2 look all big to all these people on NG who don't know what real hip hop is, seems to me as if some1 fell from the top n once some1 else comes and takes his spot he gets pissed at the one person who was wit u from the beggining, maybe I haven't reviewed many o ya tracks, but I always went on ya page n gave u ma' 5. I even made that diss to AEP(even tho it was shit) but I put ma' word in. Now u jus come outta nowhere n start dissin' me, I ain't even that big on NG, I put shit up herefor feedback as I'vesaid b4. Anyways thanks for the blind rage,
BN out

[YBP : Crunch Time]

okay breeze

that beat is hard as fuck cuzz i wanna hop on the remix ya dig let's get this a.s.a.p damn ya'll n***as can spit some sick shit

YoungBreeze responds:

you already know my n***a. lets get it!!

[Lyrical Expertise]

okay i hear u mang

i like the way u spit mang but it sound like u were out of breath lol tight verse just work on it more u can deliver it way better u hear me just keep doing u i'll back ya'll up on the beef shit iight cuzzo 10/10 5/5 ya dig holla @ cha boi mang

war-spawn responds:

Be that spit fire flow. Shit is constant for me. I know I still need improvement on some of my delivery, and I need to even my stanzas a bit more, but other than that, I'll be good. We need to get this shit popping fast fam, and tell Ses not to freestyle is fucking verse, lmao.

[R.I.P. RMP (Diss)]

the fist real track on NG> are u for real

I wuz droppin on NG before any of u even started making music BN u ain't on beat at all and yur quality is horrible yur punchlines are used so much in the rap game mang fix up ya delivery mang ...who ever is in the second can barely be heard so nothing said bout him...so breeze u sound like every New York rapper ...get u a original style mang cuz i've heard new york n***as down here spit the same way cuz u can't bust a grapefruit in a food fight are u serious cuz...u the hottest on the track but i feel like u can do better mang it's wuteva i back DJ Ses i ain't on his dick but we koo so either or N.D.P steppin in u kno what happens when i come in beef

Broken-Needle responds:

dawg thaz Lejin not Breeze only the beat and mixing is by Breeze, and hope u kno this isn't for real so glad u asked that, lmao. Anyways man I got respect for you and u kno I been here long ago backin u and all of NDP up I even made a diss against the people u guys beefed with so I got no problems wit u anyway,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out