Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[o__2pac Intro Piano Beat__o]

Get Josh off the D&B

we're hip hop produce u haven't been doing rele anything
so I'm tha new nigga on backfire
So wise the fuck up
man anotha thin WE ARE HIP HOP PRODUCERS NUTHIN WRONG WIT D&B JUST WE ARE HIP HOP PRODUCERS!!!11

Ineptitude responds:

i'm only part of your little "record company" because josh begged me to be when it was first starting. so "wise the fuck up," little 16 yr old.

seriously, man. i'd love to battle you -- produce a track, write lyrics, and record them -- just to put you in your place. IM me. for real.

[Hip Hop Skip]

It's okay

not all that bad just keep on workin we need a girl on backfire
hopefully when u get betta
I'll let u join

Lova-Gurl responds:

Yeah i'm not that great i need to learn more bout fl i'm tryin though

[Broken Piano Revised]

Like it

Nice bro good thing u came through
I give mike or aka delucks a boost on makin beats
Some of my bois say I'm betta than u
but I say not yet
I'm dropin the collab me and mike did
rele soon
give me a lil bit
this song STILL NOT BETTA THAN MINE !!!!!!!! LOL
nuttin but love easy

Karbon responds:

its iight if ya guys think dat, i'm not havin a contest or wateva, lol. its all good.

[Riot]

Nice

U have 2 finish this one I like it but it needs bass
and switch ups and shit but good song
Check out L_A/RCR AFTERNOONISH COLLAB
for help on switch up and tell me if u like it

Ravy responds:

Working on it atm. ;) Thanks for the tips, I'll check out your song!
Thanks for the review.

[Tight beat]

do u have a life

U downloaded this off kazaa or bearshare or some shit come on man do sumthing of yur own

mason-master responds:

You have been saying stuff about me that is BS. So just shutup you damn asshole. Let people listen to what they want, this is my song! I don't even have Kazza or any music downloading program so learn before you speak.

[Baller Beat (Remix)]

RELE LIKE IT

So this is what the original sounds like
dis is nice Conner
Me and u need 2 hurry up and
join backfire JB told me he might comsider me so I'm gonna ask bout u
we 2 niggas wit good skills
we juss not as good as rcr or jb
but we'll get there
if u want hit me up
email me at [e-mail]
Oh yeah I'm the shit at rappin' so once I get my new computer
I'm gonna use Knuck if u buck
u goona like it I'll email u one of yur verses
juss hit me hit u up
what is yur email adress

ConnerB responds:

Hell yeah.
We are good but not as good as JB or RCR, you're right.
We do need to team up and you can use Knuck If You Buck and make a verse to it. I can add more to the song if I need to, if you want to make your verse longer.
My email is [e-mail]
-ConnerB

[Let The Rain Fall Down*preview]

Nice

did I give u an inspiration
wit my broken piano with that deep shit

Karbon responds:

sorta. but its all good.

[Abidan-Conscience is fading]

Naw I'm not LA Reid

but nice song good raps cuz u got some skills I'll give u that I'll give u some beats 2 rap 2 go to my boi rcrdelucks he got some shit

KuntaKente6475 responds:

Are you a producer? And i'm the next new rapper?

[Bia Bia *Remix*]

what the fuck

No offense bro but try to come out wit yur own stuff it's just the song I got the cd

mason-master responds:

Sorry, i sent in the wrong song... I would send in the real one but its quite bigger than it needs to be.

Sorry

[Melodramatic]

OMFG

nice bro hit me up when u done wit da colab

illumatiks responds:

haha iight, imma prolli have it finished on monday if thingz go tha ryte way, but i wont be able ta post it till tuesday...i got yu

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