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would like to rap on this

there's just one off note when u finish up and ge tme a full version i will kill this with some serious ..poetic lyrics i'll bring...my real shit...my lyrics that i've never shown NG holla @ me

plzz dawg i wanna spit on this

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stl-product314 responds:

You know I got you dog. We'll be in contact.

Real muthafuckin talk.

needs..work

but it's tight as hell add other insturments to this yur drums are starting to get a lil better nice job doe

Dj-Imfamous-bbent responds:

good looking out :D

nice but needs more

i like the way this came in bro u are rele becomin very good at sampling but the snare u use is very annoying i hate it lol but nice beat overall just keep comin with them beatz

DpD fo life

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very unique sound

but i does need some work...for one yur drums are too simple even tho mine are most of the time lol...but also u need to have backround melodies to fit with the song..when u make a beat u want it to have it's fullness..basically the beatz never gets boring alwayz try to add a new melody or sound to make it more complete..but overall nice beat a li repetitive but it's a hip hop insturmental...so just keep do wut u do homie ..check out my new beat mang..

o yea ...i like dat sound just keep workin on it it'll be some fire shit if u put more time into it

be ezy

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damn man

on everythin i love when u done with this i rele do wanna use it..i got some nice ass lyrics to this mang hit me back

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Dj-Imfamous-bbent responds:

ight bet i wanna hear wat u got for this track mang

Your Loving Sample King DpD fo Life

nice man...

i like this ...not to bad bro just keep practin..i would like to remix this

my aim is PoeticReven so hit me up if u got it or yahoo "ricjilla16"

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nice...

this is the best track u have done no lie..u get alot of respect from me...and hopefully if i don't have anything to do this weekend I'll collab with you

iight homie keep this fire comin

ya boi reven

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regardless if u like me or not

I'mma give u wut u deserve Thanks for your vote, Poetic_Reven! You voted 5 for Losing All Hope, raising its score from 0.00 to 5.00.
intros long but the beat is nice as hell

damn....

ay jo u kno i told u i'd spit on it and i got a verse for it already so just wait my nig

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Karbon responds:

Yeah, you gotta spit on this, its waitin for you, Lol.

damn.....

this is sick homie

Thanks for your vote, Poetic_Reven! You voted 5 for Newgrounds Anthem, raising its score from 3.57 to 3.75.

I Am Hip Hop's False, I Am The Underground Flop that never made it.....My Name Will Be Heard Through This 5$ Microphone and Through These Public Assistance Speakers...

Luis Aponte @Poetic-Reven

Age 35, Female

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Orlando Fl

Joined on 11/3/04

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