Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slipin]

liked this better

i love piano bro.. no lie like i said before add somethin in it

[Leavein For King_Sample_King]

hmm... not bad

u know what you need to do, add more insturments
this beat is too empty.....check to see if u have strings flutes somethin..if u don't holla @ me i have some pretty good stringz..
AIM is PoeticReven.....holla @ me

be ezy ...hope u improve to make this some serious shit...

~1~

[Reven Tribute Ft. Piracy]

thanx guys

nice no doubt...piracy's stringz need a lil work then it'll b perfection

Fury responds:

chea man
hope ta see you around

~1~

[Droppin' New Bombs]

effort stays at 7

we didn't do much to what we can rele pull it's nice dawg see...u have my name in anything you'll stay on the front page...lol....but fo real we need to get upon a serious collab...this will not b shown to NG it'll b for ou listening pleasure lol...ay be ezy ..AND JEEP YA PENIS DRENCHED ..and DROWNING IN THAT PUSSY JUICE

~1~

stl-product314 responds:

I hear you on that shit. It'll be some shit we can bump as we keepin' our penises drenched . . . .

But my penis doesn't drown in the pussy juice, the pussy juice drowns in my penis buddy. lol

Real Muthafuckin' talk.

[Melange Remix]

nothin but tens my nig

i can't believe i didn't hear this...before it's crazy as fuck i'm in amazement right now....it's very impressive.....sry dawg had to pul dem out...i damn bro I'm in awe right now of this beat u have the most respect from me dawg i lie to u not....

~1~

stl-product314 responds:

Except for the originality and effort it would be tens. Thanks for real though man. I'm just tryin' to catch up with you homie.

Real muthafuckin' talk.

[Music Man (Level 1 )]

let me get this

I'll improve it and send it back...send it to my email u said u need help if u Fl 6 i got chu iight be ezy my nig i ain't gonna leave u out i can't do it to ppl who love my music..but that piano is sick

~1~

MikeBlade responds:

I got Studio 5 right now..in about 1 or 2 when I get the money up..cuz billz be killin a nigga. But I will start sending yo sum of my stuff...and have u review it...hopefully u can give me that hip hop feel that be in yo shit....oh and bro..just so u know..I AINT RIDIN NO DICK!!!!...juz got madd respect for talent.

[Realm of Swords]

not bad....

don't worry about it..yur drums actually yur snare sounds like a rock and roll snare...of u put too much reverb in yur beatz....cuz it echos too much...but yur melodies ain't bad my nig no doubt if u need help tha retired king will b here for u I'll help u out in anyway.....that u can

~1~

MikeBlade responds:

Good lookin bro. Fuck'in with me gonna bring dat ass out of retirement...u wait and see bro.

[The Southern Movement]

stolen...then u talk about me....

this is colorado productions if u don't wanna ask me ask stl-product then my homeboiz who live in colorado...my nigga Kcblaze told me u stole it but i ain't gonna put no link i would wanna destroy your career

~1~

unless..u can prove it this is stolen sry mang i found out that MOST of yur ish is stolen....

[Untitled part 1]

damn...

i would love to remix this it sounds like u used FL for the drums...I'm freestylin to it now at 3:04 in the morning lol good shit

~1~

[Untitled part 2]

nice...overall

Thanks for your vote, Poetic_Reven! You voted 5 for Untitled part 2, raising its score from 3.00 to 3.33.

nice sample i might wanna sample it too to make it better but u did a good job just needs a snare...oh also..when u sample don't let the sample b the main insturment incorporate yur own sounds into the beat to make it sound more unique

~1~

SwindleSquad responds:

Thanks Reven..your song take me with you inspired me to start sampling from viet/asian music..thanks for voting 5 i appreciate it..