Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sad ending Good book]

not bad

there are pauses in the melody that needs just a lil bit of fixin'
but it's pretty good it sounds like u are startin to progress keep it up

Loc-G-Cuddy responds:

aiight good lookin out

~one love & respect~
2-11

[So Seductive]

haha

yo mike I remember how long u were workin on this
u showed me parts here and there
but we gonna come back not on here but in the real industry

illumatiks responds:

No doubt yo, we tryin, and now im back, got more inspiration, i wonder why, lol iight yo b eazy

~1~

[First beat (Short)]

slow it down

rele it need to b slow sounds like a dance song
or somethin idk

thanx 4 tha reveiw since u gave me one I'll return the favor
just study ya music skill will come in time
I've only been makin beatz 4 9 months
so just work with wut u have

also wut program do u use
hit me back

Dj-Imfamous-bbent responds:

na man its just when i made dis shyt i was half out man ..ill make soumthing betta next time ight 1

[Da Block is Hot]

oooo

I like it mang I'll b online in a lil I wuz sellin beatz all day
I'm tryan get known

[Valiant]

wow...

this is great I'm so speachless for some reason this sounds like a old SNS game melody but I love it good job check me out

tedJohnston responds:

hey, thanks for the review! i'm glad you liked the song! your review was exactly what i was trying to accomplish, that old 16-bit VG feel. thanks dude, your review means alot!

cheers an g'day.

-Ted Johnston

[Black And White Keys]

it's iight

I liked the piano
it's rele good I heard u used some samples called break beat paradise
I've heard them be4 becuz I'm used them but nonetheless
I like it keep it up
too many scratches

ConnerB responds:

Yeah thanks, man. The scratches, I tried not to make it repetitive with just the piano and the beat so I added some scratches. Thanks for reviewing.

[Conceptual Instrumental]

it's not that good

this sounds more like techno
than hip hop it would b betta it u did change it to techno or dance
it has some hip hop to it
but when it breaks ir sound like somthin from a video game
just keep practicin
and a good hip hop will come

be ezy

~1~

JonH2O responds:

ok

[A-BOMB]

this is all u need to know........

Thanks for your vote, Poetic_Reven! You voted 5 for A-BOMB, raising its score from 0.00 to 5.00.

the piano....I'm speechless

chead86 responds:

Thanks for the review man, and thnx for votin too. I appreciate it.

-Chead

[_-_Hip Hop Beat_-_]

I remember this one

u did rele good on the piano u one of the best girlz on here thas all I got to say
I'll rap on this if u want me to
I'll rap about the struggle
to live
keep this up and nothin but positive reviews from me

Lova-Gurl responds:

ok thanks for the review.