Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Da newest sh**]

Do U have problems

Stop submitting songs that r copyright do something of yur own come on man be fo reel

[Walking In The Dark]

Man ?

U need to fix it juss a little bit no offense
it's not all that great but ot doesn't completely suck take anotha try at it
Oh yeah cheeseworks me and lilmannie are no the same people I just called him and told him bout newgrounds and he sign up we're brothers seperate alright damn I did do I of the beats for him when I wuz just learnin' trust me my stuff is alot better check it out I don't wnat 2 have a pissed off fan Manuel told bout yur review

[Baller Beat (Remix)]

RELE LIKE IT

So this is what the original sounds like
dis is nice Conner
Me and u need 2 hurry up and
join backfire JB told me he might comsider me so I'm gonna ask bout u
we 2 niggas wit good skills
we juss not as good as rcr or jb
but we'll get there
if u want hit me up
email me at [e-mail]
Oh yeah I'm the shit at rappin' so once I get my new computer
I'm gonna use Knuck if u buck
u goona like it I'll email u one of yur verses
juss hit me hit u up
what is yur email adress

ConnerB responds:

Hell yeah.
We are good but not as good as JB or RCR, you're right.
We do need to team up and you can use Knuck If You Buck and make a verse to it. I can add more to the song if I need to, if you want to make your verse longer.
My email is [e-mail]
-ConnerB

[World Ina Whirl]

Oh? like the track

Lovin' dis one what did u use to do this did u use fruity loops or acid loops
dis is pretty good Wuz rappin' to dis 1
keep on going lsten 2 my broken piano Oh yeah send me the Mp3 Pleez cuz I'm gonna try 2 remix
if u got the save file
send dat 2 me at [e-mail]

[Da Luv Beat]

Ok good start

but u need to give it more drops
and switch ups and shit dats what u need
and try 2 get samples
Hey I just Started 5 weeks ago look how good I've got
juss keep going

[Abidan-Conscience is fading]

Naw I'm not LA Reid

but nice song good raps cuz u got some skills I'll give u that I'll give u some beats 2 rap 2 go to my boi rcrdelucks he got some shit

KuntaKente6475 responds:

Are you a producer? And i'm the next new rapper?

[Bia Bia *Remix*]

what the fuck

No offense bro but try to come out wit yur own stuff it's just the song I got the cd

mason-master responds:

Sorry, i sent in the wrong song... I would send in the real one but its quite bigger than it needs to be.

Sorry

[Melodramatic]

OMFG

nice bro hit me up when u done wit da colab

illumatiks responds:

haha iight, imma prolli have it finished on monday if thingz go tha ryte way, but i wont be able ta post it till tuesday...i got yu

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