Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Runnin Mouth]

wtf

nigga I ain't mainstrean I'm still underground it ain't that mang I' ain tryna make enemies and thas fucked up cuz when I voted I voted for me and you the way I've been makin beatz usin a USB port through my radio if u wanna b rivals then go head we'll b rivals
let me get my fuckin soundcard and I'll do anotha track with u and look at the reviews for our track
did I DISS U NOOOOOOOO
then stop bruh u actin real childish right now mang plus I got a new aim name it's "ricanblackboi" if u still wannad drop shit hit me up u rele needs to stop wit alla that

~1~

ThePedicidleGhost responds:

First of all, just like I said in 1 of your reviews, I looked at it as u sayin fuck u 2 me. Cuz u didnt say anything about a new sn. I was just thinkin like wtf?! Ya no lol, cuz me n u used 2 talk like every day. But the thing that really pissed me off was when u were just laughin when they kid was callin me wack n shit. I was like, yo? wtf?! No problems man. Its all good now. N yea of course I still wanna do some tracks with u man! COME OWN! lol, alright hit me up when u get this man, Peace.

[Dreams (preview)]

hmmmm

it only sounds like u sped it up thas it u didn't rele samples it send me the sample I'll sample it

kamakazi-AKA-crazy responds:

you mean like the song itself

[Fuck NG Haters (peep comment)]

nice

much props on this one man idk bout lyrics
anotha thing i see u startin to bring heat
everyone on NG says i can only do soft beatz naw it isn't that i can't it just is that i don't ask cajete i've been makin hardcore beatz just not postin them
so I'm gonna snap on some beatz to keep the haters away cuz thas how we suppose to do hey if u keep going like this u might reach my level lol jp
but honestly I'll let u hear a beat with my full skills but not on NG
be ezy

i like this beat str8 fire

~1~

kamakazi-AKA-crazy responds:

thats cool, you can send it over email and il check that shit out.......

But on the real I have a beat that's causing like a crazy ass problem for me when i try and put a drum beat on it....

its all a rock sample but its made in a certain way that i know when i get a beat on it its gona sound like a hip hop track

Its not polished or anything its real rough..... but just see if you can do something.....you'll get half the credit of the beat........its killing me, mostly because it already has drums in it cause it a sample........ if you can put the right bass and kicks and sare in certain part i think you can get it sounding good.......try it, im gona post it right now.....its called Dreams

get back at me, aight

[The Struggles Alive]

oo shit

nigga me and my boi got this we gonna do this in a real studio I'll send it to ya when we doen we got this wut version of FL u use or wut do u use I believe u are good enough to collab with

kamakazi-AKA-crazy responds:

It really depends on the song im making ......For example this song was made with a sample I downloaded, did the beat and the two chords you hear throughout the song with a Yamaha RM1X Sequencer, and just mixed and converted in Acid Pro 4. The sequencer is like my main tool when i make any beat. I dont really use FL Studio all that much because of the quality, tho i do sometimes use it to get ideas flowin from time to time. Dont ask me how i got the sequencer....

But basiclly thats how it goes down for almost any beat. Oh an if i can get my hands on my boys keyboard, shit goes down for real at that point.

aight......and yeah if you can do some lyrics in a studio for this it'll be fire, send that shit to me when you finish

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[Blaze 50 - Jay Z Dont Sue Me]

I got u

yo this is hot ass helll yo send me the beat I wanna lay a track to this between me and u
that beat is nasty I don't want jay z's voice just send me this beat I wanna rip to this

hit me back
~1~

kamakazi-AKA-crazy responds:

Naw...... I got this beat im workin on that fire times 2...... And that shit el be a collab, my beat your voice.....Have this site on lock, no doubt.....

I probly have it by tomorow ben workin on this for a week

[Brain Damage]

ooo...

shit I like this mang u got talent I'm one of the best on here so if I say u got talent bruh....u got it keep this up I'mma help u out in all of ya ratings
I'mma give u a five for everything
much respect

~1~

kamakazi-AKA-crazy responds:

Oh Fa real......thanks man, I checked out some of your shit and its real hot. Holla at me if you need somethin aight.....peace

[mmmmmmm nice]

u need to understand

I've been going through hella shit
u don't know me I go through shit every single day
so if u want me to make better beatz offer me samples
somethin u want me to progress then help me out u can't just say I suck
so when u dissed my music the army I have behind me hated the shit u said
do u ahve a real studio or a program becuz if u wanna run at me bout the way I do my shit
f u if u wanna help me out

hit me back

~1~

Skabbish responds:

im not going to give you any samples, you have to dig for them yourself.. a good idea is to start with your parents or relatives records... Its easy to hook up a record player to a pc.. you can get a cheap turntable for about $100.
record some shit, then edit the samples using Soundforge. The programs i use are reason, soundforge and cubase... I also have equiptment wich allows me to record vocals with an acceptable quality... mic preamp and a mixer...

[Break Down! (skitz)]

wow...

yo this is a hot ass track no doubt hella props u gettin a 5 from me very easy
I might wanna collab with u u have some skills
the piano and stringz were crazy it had break downs and everything check out my beat "The Revenist"

BeatyB responds:

Thanks alot man! The Revenist was a kick ass piece!

[Meanwhile In Japan...]

the intro

I like the way it starts but that other insturment u added in wuzn't all that good yur bass wuz nice as hell
I give u props
keep workin on shit

Johnny-Beat responds:

lol, word up reven.
yo, what instrument
you mean brah?
yeah, i love the
bass line.
thx fo the rev and yah
ill keep it up.
- Johnny_Beat

[In The Dark--_--]

wow the melody

that melody wuz amazin
the piano wuz crazy i give u hella props for that keep uppin'

OMG July 30, 2005
Reviewed by: spidersuper Overall rating: 0
OMG you are such an idiot. You really think this is HIP HOP? Get the hell outta here. We've had enough of your crap. Man and seriously, you post so much SHIT. It's so annoying, I roll my eyes everytime I see a new submission from thesmalldickblackhawk. You been here what?... 2-3 months? And you actin like you own the place and shit. Fuck....
Originality: 0 Clarity: 0 Diversity: 0 Effort: 0

Reven's Response:
ay u fag u wanna try ppl come out with somethin that can top this then u can talk shit u fuckin ass in a half
don't get mad becuz he has talent
so stop hatin
I hate when pussy ass niggas just come on NG and try to b a fuckin prick
ay BlackHawk
don't listen to them I'm one of the best in hip hop and if I tell u I like this I rele do keep this up

~1~

PERVOK responds:

alright man i was actually expectin a review from you a little sooner...i dunno y.
ill drop u a line man.

thanks a lot for the review