Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[One,Two,Step]

damn u gettin' betta

Keep on going I got new tracks 4 u to listen to iight girl u got aim right I'm gettin it

Lova-Gurl responds:

k

[Likwid E- Violence Freestyle]

DAMN!!!!!!!!

dat nigga got skills shit is tight as hell fa sho tell him keep on going he's tight dats coo man I got beats if u want to use any

ABob responds:

I'm glad you liked his work! I'm a fan of his music myself,I'm glad to be his cousin!

[Kingdom Heats-Hikari]

rele good

I like the song too I rele do keep it up girl yur doing rele good I give u that I got two new songs out iight girl b ez and keep doing doing yur thing

Lova-Gurl responds:

yeah i checked them out today already i likt them

[_Super Mario64 File Select_]

it's iight

U got the slowed down from me but good try U can't do betta than me J/K keep on going u gettin betta I believe u will be at my level

Lova-Gurl responds:

thanks i know i took it from u cause i didn't know how toslow it down but now i know. i felt so stupid cause it was right in front of me.

[_-_Soothin Hip-Hop_-_]

THE SAME KICK

the melody is nice but use a different kick I"m gonna help u but It's always the same kick I'm gonna send u some good kick samples iight man ~1~

Lova-Gurl responds:

k

[Halftime]

DAMN

damn I wuz flowin like a muthafucka keep it up it's tight man don't let no one tell u different

chead86 responds:

Thanks man, i won't.

[_-Fast Piano-_]

Oh !!!!

U rele gettin down if u want the whole program of Fl hit me up alright
Gurl u gettin betta I give u that
Much love hope u neva stop wit yur music listen I'll send u one of my beats 2 study k
Just let me get yur email
K gurl be easy

L_A Aka Swisha Tha Nigga From Chicago

P.s chenge the kicks and the clpa sanre don't use it sp many times in eack song just tryin 2 give u tips my boi rcrdelucks Is my tutor for my beats
and is still helping me I help u gurl even though I'm good
I'm still learnin
Keep on going neva stop
got mad love for u

Lova-Gurl responds:

ok my e-mail is [e-mail] and thanks for the tip i'll use sumthin diffent in my next song.

[First hip hop]

Kicks r off

It's makes the whole song sounds horrible of u want the whole progam hit me up at [e-mail]
If u don't have it already

Lova-Gurl responds:

i know it's all messed up

[Drop It Like It's Hot Preview]

Yur gettin betta

This is a lil bit betta
Yur improving I give u that keep on working on that ok
L_A Aka. Swisha tha Nigga From Chicago

Lova-Gurl responds:

yeah i guess i'm gettin betta but it will be a long time till i get as good as u i know dat fo a fact

_-Kimi-_ A.K.A Black Trenton Gurl

[_-_High Notes_-_]

Work on it

Listen if u want 2 join backfire hit me up I'll help u this dance song isn't all that bad but try a hip hop beat come I know u can do this just work hard Hit me up at [e-mail] ask me any question . and don't submit more then a beat or 2 every 2 days or so cuz if people see that u submitted a whole bunch of beats they'll think that u didn't put a whole bunch of effort into the beat peace I'm out

L_A Aka.Swisha Tha Nigga From Chicago

Lova-Gurl responds:

aight i'll submit my first one well maybe not cause it kinda sounds like ya white tee remix i'll wait till i make another one so.... i'm out

_-Kimi-_ A.K.A. Black Trenton Gurl