Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nobody Respects You(diss)]

wtf

so are u guyz gonna keep attackin eas other cuz this is very boring BN u can't rap bruh honestly and truly u have no flow at all bruh i'm not sayin i'm the best in the world i give u that u kno what good music is i gave u that much but rappin no no no sirrrrrr
i only listened to lejin chorus and that's it i don't care bruh stop my ears wanna cry they're bleedin to death don't quit ya day job i wuz spittin better than u at 13 i actually wuz on beat i don't care if u were high or drunk or on crack or LSD i don't care u can't rap bruh u just can't ti's not in u there's no way in hell u could get any better some ppl can rap some ppl can't and to speak the truth u can't even if u keep trying Nobody respects u dawg i ain't supportin nobody but n***as on NG don't kno what hip hop is how in the hell do u get rated up and i get rated down i ain't mad i don't care but the truth is i'm better than u and i get rated down bullshit ass n***as don't like real hip hop and yur not that i don't care how long you've been listening to hip hop hip hop is not u in anyway ....so i will prove my point that this beef is pointless and it's really pointless when your not even on beat yur delivery is not on point u have no punchlines where are yur metaphors...wait i forgot ....that u forgot that u smoke to much and u don't kno what they are cuz weed isn't an excuse for nothing and it will never be .....

Don't quit ya day job i have no reason to diss u yur no where near my level...

Broken-Needle responds:

Well Reven seems to me like ur wanting attention right now, u jus said u didn't even listen to ma' part so how u write such a long review based on assumption? And why are you coming to me when u being hated on? as u can see this track don't got the best score either, if NG is so bad then why da fuck are u still here? I put shit up here for the reviews, I couldn't care less about mines or anyone elses score. And what's wit this blind rage? U say u ain't got beef wit me then why u goin around sayin I beg u to not diss me? seems like u tryin 2 look all big to all these people on NG who don't know what real hip hop is, seems to me as if some1 fell from the top n once some1 else comes and takes his spot he gets pissed at the one person who was wit u from the beggining, maybe I haven't reviewed many o ya tracks, but I always went on ya page n gave u ma' 5. I even made that diss to AEP(even tho it was shit) but I put ma' word in. Now u jus come outta nowhere n start dissin' me, I ain't even that big on NG, I put shit up herefor feedback as I'vesaid b4. Anyways thanks for the blind rage,
BN out

[Tryna Move Me (CRG Remix)]

DAMN N***A

you murdered this shit to an extreme damn just fix the distortion and i'll kill this lyrically u did a nasty ass beat i love the shit hella props keep doing u

[YBP : Crunch Time]

okay breeze

that beat is hard as fuck cuzz i wanna hop on the remix ya dig let's get this a.s.a.p damn ya'll n***as can spit some sick shit

YoungBreeze responds:

you already know my n***a. lets get it!!

[Hold It Down]

ay mang

i hear u on this shit bruh i like the piano this is some sick ass shit bruh keep doing shit i might freestyle to this just for u cuz

[Lyrical Expertise]

okay i hear u mang

i like the way u spit mang but it sound like u were out of breath lol tight verse just work on it more u can deliver it way better u hear me just keep doing u i'll back ya'll up on the beef shit iight cuzzo 10/10 5/5 ya dig holla @ cha boi mang

war-spawn responds:

Be that spit fire flow. Shit is constant for me. I know I still need improvement on some of my delivery, and I need to even my stanzas a bit more, but other than that, I'll be good. We need to get this shit popping fast fam, and tell Ses not to freestyle is fucking verse, lmao.

[R.I.P. RMP (Diss)]

the fist real track on NG> are u for real

I wuz droppin on NG before any of u even started making music BN u ain't on beat at all and yur quality is horrible yur punchlines are used so much in the rap game mang fix up ya delivery mang ...who ever is in the second can barely be heard so nothing said bout him...so breeze u sound like every New York rapper ...get u a original style mang cuz i've heard new york n***as down here spit the same way cuz u can't bust a grapefruit in a food fight are u serious cuz...u the hottest on the track but i feel like u can do better mang it's wuteva i back DJ Ses i ain't on his dick but we koo so either or N.D.P steppin in u kno what happens when i come in beef

Broken-Needle responds:

dawg thaz Lejin not Breeze only the beat and mixing is by Breeze, and hope u kno this isn't for real so glad u asked that, lmao. Anyways man I got respect for you and u kno I been here long ago backin u and all of NDP up I even made a diss against the people u guys beefed with so I got no problems wit u anyway,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[- Lo-Ca$h Virtue -]

still needs mixing down

but i'm not gonna deny that it's a hot ass beat cuzzo so u and bleek keep doin u

Greeksta-69 responds:

I always do me dont worry about that, bleek does his thing too and we appreciate the review Reven thanks bro.

Greek and Bleek

[I Got It Made!!!!]

oh shit

so i see u steppin up mang haha proud of u cuz u've been doing it big keep doing it

CaliberTheButcher responds:

thats whats poppin. im glad u liked it bra. i got some hatas out here now jus cuz of the n***as i work wit. shit funny aint it?

[_-_Diamonds In My Mouth_-_]

wtf

this is a hot ass beat ...why they hatin on u.. i like the way u chopped up the vocals too u gettin better alwayz fuck wit producin on the side ya feel me keep doing u

[Who Crunk??]

this could be hotter

but since it's from 3 years ago i see why lol...i there could've been more to the stringz...in the begining so i expected more...and the breakdown is nice too thanx for all the reveiw my nig