Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ricky.C - PROMO (Ft. Lejin)]

ya verse

is hot ass fuck damn if u were to spit like this we would do an album together

[DAY & NIGHT]

Still got that same metiality

lol nice beat my i like everything that u used in here but i know this ain't no where close to how u do thangs

stl-product314 responds:

Yeah, this just gon be me n my n***a single down herre in Texas. Well, one of em.

[HIT EM']

okay i feel you on this one

but the next step to producing is mixing down your music

I like the techno insturment cuz thas more my style but this is nice as hell
i'm surprised that your actually making heat from the Fl sounds
respect on that cuz too many ppl complain about
but you do need more sounds because it sounds like a regular Fl beat

when you use FL you don't want it to sound like one you feel me

[COLLASAL]

more honesty

I like the build up I see your using Fl default sounds
the beat sounds like a pastor troy beat than anything else
your creativity is getting better but some high strings would do justice to this track but overall i like it
it kept my head knodin which is good

[I REP GA!]

honesty

this sounds like a mediocre production
just too common now a days if you wanna become a better producer
stay away from mimicing lil jon's style cuz he can't make beatz

[Pill Poppin]

not bad at all

but repeating lil wayne's lines towards the end shows no creativtiy

but ay what bout that beat mang

shit go hard wuz up with a lyrical collab?

send it to [e-mail]

gam3fr33k responds:

ya yo ill talk to ma boys and see where they at

thnx for the review

~1~

[Random Acts Assassins]

iight iight like what i hear

thanx for the shoutout my nig i wasn't doubtin you at all it's just I've never heard you flow
iight now it's time i finally got some lyrical competition but it's all love mang

take it easy

keep doing what you do

~Props~

HeLLsGaUrDiAn responds:

There we go ;) finally my n***a that made this beat. Yeah I'm feeling the love lol glad you liked it, but we got an ace up our sleeves. I guarantee you that our new song that we're working on is gonna blow ya'll away. The next song is a more poetical flow with insane lyrics. iight my n***a, stay up and keep doing you.

Try to rate this up so I can get more people listening to this lol, and of course I'm always doing the same for your stuff man.

[Dj Ses - I'm RMP (Produced By BeatBreaker187)]

hmmm

I felt like you should've ghosted everytime you said cuz i'm Rmp

like that would've brang me more to the track to give more of a message i kno the message of this track so i'm feelin hmm you've stepped up ya flow sounds more cordinated update me more on the non internet shit

[Stay On Top]

hmmm

i kno where you were going with this

this shit sound like some pastor troy shit dawg i can just hear

WELL UH HUH on this lol but it would've been better if you used a bass drum cuz the kick isn't workin for u dawg

well look

keep droppin beatz i'mma keep reveiw and giving you tips on em iight

[hellion new beat young buck]

i kno where this is from

i kno this song lol ayo my nig

ain't no faults in this beat fuck what anyone tells you bruh

you got talent hold it down you tha muthafucking truth

~Props~

HellionProductionz responds:

good looks on da comment.