Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Knuck if you Buck Socom Remix]

nice rhymes

Hey man nice one juss keep on going I'm Just started too
I'm a learnin' producer at fullcell in Orlando but I just moved down here

KuntaKente6475 responds:

Are You LA Reid?

[Religious Destruction]

thanks delucks for tha push

much love man, need to work on that tryin' to get my website downpacked
I might try to collab wit u
but I only have the demo my peep's don't want to help me can u email me your registration name for fl studio cause it's hard for me to do a beat in one day
since u got the whole program it's easier for u
u don't have to rush
I still think I suck at makin' beats
I practice every day for hours last weekend I didn't sleep for 3 days tryin' to get better
realmguys said I'm progressing fast I don't think so
but, I might keep on going and I don't know how to email you mp3's or email at all
can't get a mic for my computer so the freestylin' gonna take a while
hit me up at [e-mail]

illumatiks responds:

aint not thing man, i got yu, ill send yu tha thing yu want when yu reply to my email i juss sent yu

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[ricjilla remix-rnb]

damn yours is better than mine

damn made mine look like shit
you got way more talent than me
I suck bro
made me look like an ass
Should I stop makin' beats
Or should I keep on going
I don't know
why in the hell I started
wish I had your talent
only been in dis fo 3weeks
you been in it fo bout a year damn
how am I suppose 2 catch up
I think I should stop cause I ain't as good as
twisted or dj drizzle or u
Damn I don't think I can think I can do dis anymore
how in the hell am I pose to join backfire if
I can't progress any faster
I think I'll stop makin' beats
nice song delucks
you'll always be better than me

illumatiks responds:

yo man, that wuznt tha point of tha remix, tha point wuz to show yu wut i mean when i say variety and changes in beats...look imma tell yu tha same thing i told ya boi lilmannie...

it takes mad time to get ta tha point where people will be in awe of yu, i aint even there yet, thas why i still practice...and i dont submit every beat...i didnt even submit to NG until afta 8 monthz of makin beats...

work on yur skillz, when yu listen to music, dont listen to tha lyrics, listen to tha beat and STUDY THA FUCK outta tha beat, seriousli, thas wut i do...

if yu wanna rap, then start wit poetry, and feel tha words yu feelin, not wut rhymes wit wut, dont follow todays rap trends...

yo i got yu, n imma help yu through this iight, email me wit ya phone n ill hit yu up one these dayz and ill show yu wut yu needa kno bout fruityloopz iight?

keep makin beats man, not only for yu, but for tha people that enjoy it, i enjoy it too, i like helpin people who feel they need it, i just try to rate honestly by YUR standards, so if i give yu a 10, then thas mad good for yu, but wit every 10 i give...tha standard goes up...but who gives a shyt bout my standards man. Just do ya best.

Get at me...

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[Bad Guy]

OMFG

Nice one dis shit is tight tell me what I need 2 make my beats better Check out kill em' remix slowed down and CG'S Gangsta Anthem

BoneThugRebel responds:

Thanks bro, its midwest they dont know about us, im from mil-town you are from chi-town, lets do a midwest invasion collabo together, can you rap? Your beats are nice and you are off to a good start!

email me: [e-mail]

[Eminem Stylez 2]

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

delucks I would like 2 join Backfire Records cuz I think ya'll needs a person from chi-town 2 tell you how people from the midwest do and I just took
3 bullets 2 the chest I don't know how I survived
but god was on my side and hit me back at [e-mail]

P.S send me ballers beat remix
I like it alot
and tell my boy lilmannie13 to keep up wit his beats cause you and jugglao are tight and he's not all that good also sees my beats gettin' better and he's in a depression please tell he what his beats need for he can be as good as you and review kill'em remix slowed down much love peace

illumatiks responds:

iight yo, i got yu imma check by this dude in a bit n help him out, my fault i didnt earlier, tooke me mad long to see this one

[March*]

Nice drums

really liked it drumline type ish

chead86 responds:

gracias

[What up doe]

Fa Sho tight work

You keep learin'

lilmannie13 responds:

Luda I'm stoppin' makin' beats cause I'm just not you much love from lilmannie I G 4EVER DOGG SOME PRICK SAID
WE ARE THE SAME PERSON CAN YOU BELIEVE THIS BITCH

[Show Me What You Got]

anotha hot one

Alright you needs to go public wit these beats the same I'm doing for rappin' cause
I wish a muthafucker would try to my will
fuck around feel this flame on the stainless steel
niggas really want to talk
but they ain't fo real
hit dis up like ric jill

illumatiks responds:

lol, thanks for reviewin

[Short visit to Soulville]

NICE!!!!

CHECK OUT SOME OF MY STUFF AND TELL ME WHAT i NEED TO MAKE THEM BETTER

Realmguys responds:

Thanks for the nice review. I noticed your name changed from luda to swisha.. what happened?

[Rcrdelucks-Baller Beat RMX]

tight work

Dis shit is mad tight fa sho you got mad talent
wish I had yours just started doin' beats on fl studio I submited some warm up beats tell me what I need to make them better pleez

illumatiks responds:

iight yo, ill check by n give yu some hintz, thankz for reviewin