Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pimp]

Yo GATZ

what it do pimp suit I got 4 tracks to lay down 4 u and anthony
yo kimi this is the person who made this song
mercernay RECORDS

[Halftime]

DAMN

damn I wuz flowin like a muthafucka keep it up it's tight man don't let no one tell u different

chead86 responds:

Thanks man, i won't.

[Thinkin Of]

had 2 give u a ten

Man I'm going through this 2
Man much love I don't care bout it's score
I rele feel u bout
this song let' finish the memory song that me, you
and One aka TBL
We need 2 finish and I'm doing a song for Christine

[What You Think]

U know

Rele good job on this one man be easy
~1~

[3 More 2nds]

Damn!!!

Oh shit first time I listened 2 this
IT IS TIGHT AS FUCK
FUCK ANY! WHO SAY THIS SUCK

[_-Fast Piano-_]

Oh !!!!

U rele gettin down if u want the whole program of Fl hit me up alright
Gurl u gettin betta I give u that
Much love hope u neva stop wit yur music listen I'll send u one of my beats 2 study k
Just let me get yur email
K gurl be easy

L_A Aka Swisha Tha Nigga From Chicago

P.s chenge the kicks and the clpa sanre don't use it sp many times in eack song just tryin 2 give u tips my boi rcrdelucks Is my tutor for my beats
and is still helping me I help u gurl even though I'm good
I'm still learnin
Keep on going neva stop
got mad love for u

Lova-Gurl responds:

ok my e-mail is [e-mail] and thanks for the tip i'll use sumthin diffent in my next song.

[Hip Enough]

WTF

Listen nigga I live in Orlandoso wise the fuck up bitch wut is yur problem
I've fough 32 years and their mad bigger than me so if u want 2 scrap come ovea here 2 the florida mall so I can jaw yur bitch ass Fuck U NIGGA
U don't know whp u r fucking wit nigga Prince of the I G's
U know who that is nigga Imperial Gangsta's bitch of Chicago
1 call I can get yur ass merked fuck nigga

If u want 2 be cool we could chill but nigga if u wanna throw hands Go 2 the florida mall and go 2 my house and we'll do the muthafucking thing
I alot betta than josh I ain't never gonna beg 2 no punk ass bitch
yea I might be little but bet u I could beat the shit out of u come 2 the mall in front of FYE

Just me and u in front of my house my poeple don't care if I fight whatever Doe
No hatin
I'm gonna tell u like this bitch get off my dick

[First hip hop]

Kicks r off

It's makes the whole song sounds horrible of u want the whole progam hit me up at [e-mail]
If u don't have it already

Lova-Gurl responds:

i know it's all messed up

[Drop It Like It's Hot Preview]

Yur gettin betta

This is a lil bit betta
Yur improving I give u that keep on working on that ok
L_A Aka. Swisha tha Nigga From Chicago

Lova-Gurl responds:

yeah i guess i'm gettin betta but it will be a long time till i get as good as u i know dat fo a fact

_-Kimi-_ A.K.A Black Trenton Gurl