Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Issues, No Worries]

it's pretty good

not all that bad I like it check out L_A/RCR AFTERNOONISH COLLAB

ConnerB responds:

Hey thanks, LA. I appreciate it, man. I'll go listen to your song now. Thanks for reviewin'.

-ConnerB (DJ Chaos)

[Knuck if you Buck Socom Remix]

nice rhymes

Hey man nice one juss keep on going I'm Just started too
I'm a learnin' producer at fullcell in Orlando but I just moved down here

KuntaKente6475 responds:

Are You LA Reid?

[Nightmare Rap]

OMG!!!!!!!

really liked it had me freestylin' for like a hour
check out mine and rcrdelucks collab L_A/RCR AFTERNOONISH COLLAB
just fo yur info dis is my last name from luda, swisha, Chitowngangsta,ricjilla now it's L_A and it'll stay that way

[tyke -THE LAST POST(hiphopRmx)]

it 's ok nice first

it's ok I gave u a 4 just cause u juss startin'
good starte Check out some of my beats juss started 2 but the pimp big mike aka rcrdelucks is helpin' me so keep it going guy juss keep workin' at it don't get mad at my reveiw I reveiw honestly

[TBL/rcrdelucks-Last Words]

Cot Damn It's a new day

damn both of ya have some good mic skills
gonna give tonyblaklungz
one of my verses to put in his songs
cause my speakers are fucked up AND i WON'T be able to freestyle and show people my skills
damn tell me the program u used for yur recording
of yo voice wit da beat

[Can't Catch Us]

better than my first

whta up tis me RicJilla changed my name to L_A My first and last name luis aponte

bou tha beat it wuz nice
had me flowin bout life and death and back home
in a sad mood right now and rhymes commin' out my lips at random
just been flowin' all day
man be easy
did u get my emails
r u gonna help me out wit da beat collab
Oh yeah try 2 get in contact wit twizted
fo me ask him bout me pleez
oh yeah u were in it fo bout 8 months
me 4 weeks don't know how to do slides
learnin' bout the chops hit me up mike
whenever u get a chance still waitin' on the slides and check out twizted new york(remake)

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[Religious Destruction]

thanks delucks for tha push

much love man, need to work on that tryin' to get my website downpacked
I might try to collab wit u
but I only have the demo my peep's don't want to help me can u email me your registration name for fl studio cause it's hard for me to do a beat in one day
since u got the whole program it's easier for u
u don't have to rush
I still think I suck at makin' beats
I practice every day for hours last weekend I didn't sleep for 3 days tryin' to get better
realmguys said I'm progressing fast I don't think so
but, I might keep on going and I don't know how to email you mp3's or email at all
can't get a mic for my computer so the freestylin' gonna take a while
hit me up at [e-mail]

illumatiks responds:

aint not thing man, i got yu, ill send yu tha thing yu want when yu reply to my email i juss sent yu

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[ricjilla remix-rnb]

damn yours is better than mine

damn made mine look like shit
you got way more talent than me
I suck bro
made me look like an ass
Should I stop makin' beats
Or should I keep on going
I don't know
why in the hell I started
wish I had your talent
only been in dis fo 3weeks
you been in it fo bout a year damn
how am I suppose 2 catch up
I think I should stop cause I ain't as good as
twisted or dj drizzle or u
Damn I don't think I can think I can do dis anymore
how in the hell am I pose to join backfire if
I can't progress any faster
I think I'll stop makin' beats
nice song delucks
you'll always be better than me

illumatiks responds:

yo man, that wuznt tha point of tha remix, tha point wuz to show yu wut i mean when i say variety and changes in beats...look imma tell yu tha same thing i told ya boi lilmannie...

it takes mad time to get ta tha point where people will be in awe of yu, i aint even there yet, thas why i still practice...and i dont submit every beat...i didnt even submit to NG until afta 8 monthz of makin beats...

work on yur skillz, when yu listen to music, dont listen to tha lyrics, listen to tha beat and STUDY THA FUCK outta tha beat, seriousli, thas wut i do...

if yu wanna rap, then start wit poetry, and feel tha words yu feelin, not wut rhymes wit wut, dont follow todays rap trends...

yo i got yu, n imma help yu through this iight, email me wit ya phone n ill hit yu up one these dayz and ill show yu wut yu needa kno bout fruityloopz iight?

keep makin beats man, not only for yu, but for tha people that enjoy it, i enjoy it too, i like helpin people who feel they need it, i just try to rate honestly by YUR standards, so if i give yu a 10, then thas mad good for yu, but wit every 10 i give...tha standard goes up...but who gives a shyt bout my standards man. Just do ya best.

Get at me...

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[Big Up]

BadAss

Hey nice work lovin' it had me flowin' all day
check out Kill em' remix

[Gangsta RCR Beat]

anotha hot one

Man delucks you da baddest I eva heard
wish my gansta beat sounded like dis
I got a tight verse fo you and backfire recordz
you keep on tryin' 2 make 2 the top me I'll end up
6 feet deep in a matter of 2 to 3 months cause
I'm in a gang cause I had no where 2 turn
thanks for tha review on my gangsta beat

P.S hopefully you'll make 2 the big time you got 2 much talent really would like 2 see ya
you kept it hot in tha jerz I'll keep it
in the chi.

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