Poetic-Reven's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drop It Like It's Hot Preview]

Yur gettin betta

This is a lil bit betta
Yur improving I give u that keep on working on that ok
L_A Aka. Swisha tha Nigga From Chicago

Lova-Gurl responds:

yeah i guess i'm gettin betta but it will be a long time till i get as good as u i know dat fo a fact

_-Kimi-_ A.K.A Black Trenton Gurl

[Culo Remix]

Oh like tha beat

thanks man I wuz close 2 leaving cuz of some
problems
but mike and anthony pullled me out of it
I like the song
Oh and that's wut I'm talking bout if u keep
doing beats like that
you'll do something

[Ny Style]

U downloaded this

Man U downloaded this of a kazza or WinMx
or somthing like that I'm not givin u credit for the song It's a good beat at that but try 2 come up wit yur own stuff
I'm not dissing u but try 2 come up wit stuff u did not downloaded cuz i downloaded this beat of kazza and all I dod is freestyle 2 it come work on it man I'll make a song 2 this

[_-_High Notes_-_]

Work on it

Listen if u want 2 join backfire hit me up I'll help u this dance song isn't all that bad but try a hip hop beat come I know u can do this just work hard Hit me up at [e-mail] ask me any question . and don't submit more then a beat or 2 every 2 days or so cuz if people see that u submitted a whole bunch of beats they'll think that u didn't put a whole bunch of effort into the beat peace I'm out

L_A Aka.Swisha Tha Nigga From Chicago

Lova-Gurl responds:

aight i'll submit my first one well maybe not cause it kinda sounds like ya white tee remix i'll wait till i make another one so.... i'm out

_-Kimi-_ A.K.A. Black Trenton Gurl

[o__2pac Intro Piano Beat__o]

Get Josh off the D&B

we're hip hop produce u haven't been doing rele anything
so I'm tha new nigga on backfire
So wise the fuck up
man anotha thin WE ARE HIP HOP PRODUCERS NUTHIN WRONG WIT D&B JUST WE ARE HIP HOP PRODUCERS!!!11

Ineptitude responds:

i'm only part of your little "record company" because josh begged me to be when it was first starting. so "wise the fuck up," little 16 yr old.

seriously, man. i'd love to battle you -- produce a track, write lyrics, and record them -- just to put you in your place. IM me. for real.

[Hip Hop Skip]

It's okay

not all that bad just keep on workin we need a girl on backfire
hopefully when u get betta
I'll let u join

Lova-Gurl responds:

Yeah i'm not that great i need to learn more bout fl i'm tryin though

[Broken Piano Revised]

Like it

Nice bro good thing u came through
I give mike or aka delucks a boost on makin beats
Some of my bois say I'm betta than u
but I say not yet
I'm dropin the collab me and mike did
rele soon
give me a lil bit
this song STILL NOT BETTA THAN MINE !!!!!!!! LOL
nuttin but love easy

Karbon responds:

its iight if ya guys think dat, i'm not havin a contest or wateva, lol. its all good.

[Riot]

Nice

U have 2 finish this one I like it but it needs bass
and switch ups and shit but good song
Check out L_A/RCR AFTERNOONISH COLLAB
for help on switch up and tell me if u like it

Ravy responds:

Working on it atm. ;) Thanks for the tips, I'll check out your song!
Thanks for the review.

[Rock/Hip Hop Integration]

HEY U COPIED!!!!!!!!

Juss Kidding rcr can u send me anotha FLP PLEEZ
I'm done studying and if we perish send me this Flp Thanks man good song check mines out Let's do a rock collab very soon
like 2 weeks after tha get low collab

[Rican Reggaeton]

It's OK

not betta than mine but nice lol
I'll email u one of my beats and we'll collab
MIDWEST INVASION SILENCEDINTRUDER & L_A MIL-TOWN AND CHI-TOWN NIGGA"S